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Poem–Take Me

Thank you to Gabriella Milton at Literary Revelations for publishing my poem, Take Me. I rarely submit to publications other than my book publisher or post here on my blog, so it is fun for me to have another publisher post my writing in their journal.

Below is an audio recording of my poem and a link to the written version on Literary Revelations. Please comment here and on Literary Revelations.

Photo and Poem by Mary K. Doyle

©2024, Mary K. Doyle

Responses to “Poem–Take Me”

  1. gc1963

    Very romantic 💗

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you! I hoped that got across.

    2. Prabhatshandilya

      ❤️

      1. Mary K. Doyle

        Thank you!

  2. Dawn Pisturino

    Congratulations, Mary!

  3. Destiny

    congratulations, Mary…🎉
    a tender loving poem🤍

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Destiny. I appreciate you commenting.

      1. Destiny

        pleasure always 🤍

  4. julietrobinsonscot

    This is beautiful and you read it so well, gave me chills listening to this!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Julie. That is fabulous feedback. Welcome to Midwest Mary.

  5. Ronit Penso Tasty Eats

    Congratulations on this fine achievement! 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Ronit.

  6. LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙

    Congrats, Mary! 🎉

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, T’. Have a wonderful day.

      1. LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙

        My pleasure. Enjoy your week.

  7. Maranda

    Nice! What publisher do you work with for your books?

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      A Chicago publisher, ACTA Publications. They used to publish predominately Catholic books, which is how I started. They are open to more genres at this time, however, most publishers contribute toward publication expenses and receive higher royalties.

  8. SASAN

    I like to receive. Read more by you blogger master. I interest it.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Sasan.

  9. Willie Torres Jr.

    The Poem is Absolutely Beautiful 🤗.

    Congratulations on such a Wonderful Honor. Praying for many many more Blessings.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Ah, thank you, Willie. I hope you are doing well.

      1. Willie Torres Jr.

        You Are Very Welcome

  10. luisa zambrotta

    Congratulations!
    That is a beautiful poetic message 💖💖💖

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, dear Luisa.

      1. luisa zambrotta

        You’re so welcome 💐💐💐

  11. Rosaliene Bacchus

    Congrats, Mary!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Rosaliene. I hope all is well with you and the Facebook traumas.

  12. Pooja G

    That’s amazing, congratulations.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Pooja. It’s fun to see the poem in Literary Revelations.

      1. Pooja G

        You’re very welcome.

  13. Nancy Homlitas

    Congratulations on your latest achievement! 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Nancy. How are you?

      1. Nancy Homlitas

        Great, thank you. 🙂

  14. jeanvivace

    Congratulations Mary! Your poem is very beautiful. I feel there different layers and you convey these skillfully. Your performance is excellent, love it, it comes so naturally. Very positive work and perhaps a bit romantic too.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Jean.

      1. jeanvivace

        I am very happy for you Mary and I am glad that you post your performances of your works, they are so good!!

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Thank you, Jean. I appreciate your support and feedback. Have the very best day.

          1. jeanvivace

            Mary, I have had a long time a technical problems here. My subscriptions unsubscribes by itself and some ones I cannot subscribe at all. I noticed that my subscription to you was also unsubscribed. I subbed again. Well well!

          2. Mary K. Doyle

            I’m sorry for all the difficulties, Jean. WordPress doesn’t always make things easy for us. According to some of the posts I’ve seen, the planets can disrupt technology right now. Perhaps there is something to this.

          3. jeanvivace

            Well, the scientific knowledge about astronomy I have, the sun is very active now and when the CME (coronal mass ejection) occurs it can even break satellites etc.. I have here a few big astronomical telescopes, I studied astronomy when I was younger😊 I named my cats with the stars’ names. Deneb, Sirius, Altair.. 2 others had the other names. I have only Sirius anymore. I love cats😸 I think this just some bug and it will be repaired. Smile on🌺

          4. Mary K. Doyle

            I’d like to learn more about astronomy. It is one of my son’s favorite topics, and he sends me articles on it. We used to have a cat, Tinkerbell (that’s what happens when the kids name the pet. Although, I like Tinkerbell and think I fly just like her.) I had reactions to my last boyfriend’s cats. In retrospect, I think the reactions were to him.

          5. jeanvivace

            Tinkerbell is cute and a good name for a pet. Oh but they all got your attention, right? I like to observe the sky, stars, galaxies, nebulas etc.. they are so beautiful, of course all the planets and the moon are too. I like clouds too, when I was younger I studied the meteorology too. From now few years on there will be a beautiful northern lights so every night is possible to see the beauty of the night ☺️

          6. Mary K. Doyle

            I would love to see that. City lights are too bright to see much here. You are in prime location for star-gazing.

          7. jeanvivace

            The atmosphere is not good here for star-gazing because the sea and this place is between the arctic and temperate zone. But every now and then I can see here very clearly also the faraway objects.

          8. Mary K. Doyle

            I will be back up in Upper Peninsula of Michigan next week, so perhaps, I can see them there.

          9. jeanvivace

            Northern lights are very “capricious” they come and go but there is a good chance to see them. I hope you see they’re so beautiful.

          10. Mary K. Doyle

            It would be so exciting to see the lights. I will let you know if I’m gifted with that opportunity.

          11. jeanvivace

            Thank you ☀️

  15. Sia

    It’s beautiful💖

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Sia. I appreciate you commenting.

  16. Dawna

    WOW!! Your poem is amazing and of course, your photo. Love how you captured the sunset beginning it’s decent behind the mountains.

    Loved your poem and the passion in your voice as you shared it.

    Thank you Mary for sharing and so happy it has been shared.

    Hugs my friend

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Than you, Dawna. I truly appreciate your feedback, my friend.

  17. Cindy Georgakas

    It was a beautiful poem, Maggie. Congratulations on being published on Gabriela’s site, Literary Revelations.👏💓💗

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Cindy.

      1. Cindy Georgakas

        💓💓💓

  18. mistermaxxx08

    Sensual and profound, that just puts you in a strong trance, simply amazing, incredible

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, my friend.

      1. mistermaxxx08

        You know you are gifted and deep

  19. Ernie ‘Dawg’

    That is a beautiful poem and your voice is so soothing making this excellent post Mary,

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Ernie. I appreciate all the feedback. Have the best day, my friend.

  20. Monkey’s Tale

    Congratulations Mary, it is a beautiful poem. Maggie

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you for taking the time to read, listen, and comment, Maggie.

  21. noga noga

    😍Your voice is tender and beautiful, my love, and I hope it spreads more. Good morning, roses and jasmine

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you so very much, sweet Nougat. You’re always so kind to me. I appreciate you.

      1. noga noga

        💞🙋🏼‍♀️My dear

  22. noga noga

    You will be contacted through the magazine

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Nougat.

  23. Sunshine

    Wow

  24. worldphoto12

    BUONA GIORNATA

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you for your kind support. All the best to you.

      1. worldphoto12

        GRAZIE
        BUON WEEK-END

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          anche tu

          1. worldphoto12

            GRAZIE 🙂

  25. marvellousnightmare

    Congratulations, Mary, on publishing your beautiful poem ❤

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, my dear Ms. Marvellous.

  26. PradP

    It’s beautiful, very Romantic, Congrats Mary…..more achievements to you.❤️💐❤️👏

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Dear Prad. Have the most wonderful day.

  27. Indira

    Beautiful composition, Mary! Congratulations!!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Indira. I appreciate you commenting.

  28. Amy

    Congratulations, Mary! Thank you for sharing with us.

    Beautifully written and read. I love it.

  29. MsHazyBrain

    Congratulations such a beautiful poem

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you for your kind remarks.

  30. Edward Ortiz

    Beautiful poem, Mary.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Edward.

  31. Kym Gordon Moore

    Oh wow Mary, congratulations. What a beautiful poem you submitted my friend. Bravo!!! 👏🏼😘👏🏼

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Kym.

      1. Kym Gordon Moore

        You’re welcome Mary dear. My pleasure! 🤗💖😍

  32. SiriusSea

    Amazing Mary ❤ … Congratulations !!! Lovely and sensual poem !!!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Siri. I’m sure most women are looking for the same things.

  33. learningamericanenglishonline

    Really amazing.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you. Welcome to Midwest Mary.

    2. giljonnysdiasdasilva

      My acknowledgments.

      I’m engaged in the development of English-Portuguese and Portuguese-English collocation dictionaries and people should be aware of the benefits of speaking two languages. My website is an English-Portuguese Collocation Dictionary which is designed to help people learn both American English and Brazilian Portuguese. My acknowledgments and may God bless you and your family always.

      All Benefits of Speaking American English and Brazilian Portuguese Regularly according to Proved Scientific Research and Studies

      Todos os Benefícios de Falar Inglês Americano e Português do Brasil Regularmente de acordo com Pesquisa e Estudos Científicos Comprovados

      Benefits of speaking two languages regularly all the time and every single day. Click and verify the following links and you will draw your conclusions:

      Benefícios de falar dois idiomas regularmente o tempo todo e todos os dias. Clique e verifique os seguintes links e você tirará suas próprias conclusões:

      Speaking two languages regularly prevents the onset of dementia, Alzheimer’s disease, stroke and other neurological disorders: https://www.carmarthenshire.gov.wales/home/council-services/education-schools/bilingual-education/advantages-of-being-bilingual/

      Falar dois idiomas regularmente o tempo todo impede o surgimento de demências, do mal de Alzheimer, do AVC e outros distúrbios neurológicos: https://www.carmarthenshire.gov.wales/home/council-services/education-schools/bilingual-education/advantages-of-being-bilingual/

      The only occasional use of only one language will not bring any social and psychological benefits and will not prevent the onset of dementias, Alzheimer’s disease, stroke and other neurological disorders as it explained by the renowned Canadian linguist researcher and psychologist Ellen Bialystok. Click and verify the following link where she explains the healthy benefits of speaking two languages regularly all the time.

      O uso ocasional de apenas um idioma não trará nenhum benefício social e psicológico e não impedirá o surgimento de demências, doença de Alzheimer, acidente vascular cerebral (AVC) e outros distúrbios neurológicos, como explica a renomada linguista e psicóloga canadense Ellen Bialystok. Clique e verifique o link a seguir, onde ela explica os benefícios saudáveis ​​de falar duas línguas regularmente o tempo todo.

      The Bilingual Advantage: https://www.nytimes.com/2011/05/31/science/31conversation.html

      A Vantagem de Ser Bilíngue: https://gauchazh.clicrbs.com.br/saude/vida/noticia/2013/12/falar-mais-de-um-idioma-ajuda-a-adiar-o-aparecimento-de-doencas-neurologicas-4356576.html

      To view my other websites, click or verify the link https://gravatar.com/learningamericanenglishonline

      1. Mary K. Doyle

        I’m learning from you. I have been to Portugal three times and know some basic Portuguese. I also know some Spanish, which can be confusing as there are many differences between the two languages. I find I can read more Italian because of the Spanish. All the best to you.

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  36. Ar.Titus Vargis

    Awesome

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you.

  37. Faye Deabill

    Beautiful, Mary 🥰

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Faye, and welcome to Midwest Mary. It’s a pleasure to see you here.

  38. Lea Peters

    The poem is lovely and you read it perfectly.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Lea. I appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.

  39. satyam rastogi

    So beautiful 🎸🎸

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Satyam. Enjoy the weekend.

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  42. Laura

    Congratulations Mary on having your poem published 😊 very beautiful, I love the image you included as well 🙏

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your kind comment.

  43. Prabhatshandilya

    😊

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  45. Hitasakhi

    Romantic wow and the way you give life to words by your voice!!!!!!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Hitasakhi. I appreciate your positive feedback.

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  47. HR

    Beautiful! Take my compliments 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you!

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