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Poem–Captivating

Last Friday’s hummingbird photos raised a few questions about the magnificent, little ones, so I wrote a poem in response to those inquiries. You will find the poem after the second photo.

Hummingbirds are master aviators and quite fascinating to witness. Sadly, depending on the weather, I can see them in my area for only a few months each year, from about June through September. I anxiously wait for their return each spring and mourn when they depart for warmer temperatures at the end of summer.

Following the written poem, there is a recorded version and also an audio recording of the chipping and wing noise that I hear when these birds approach. Be sure to listen for the rapid beat of their wings and their little, squeaky voice.

Captivating

The hum of the wee creature,
ruby-throated hummingbird,
captures my attention,
and I can’t turn away.

She is only about
9 centimeters long,
that’s 3 ½ inches,
and weighs only three grams.

Her wings rotate
in a figure eight,
and rapidly beat
80 times per second.

Each year, Ruby journeys
2,000 kilometers,
that’s 1243 miles,
migrating from Mexico to Canada.

I watch my little friend
suck sugar water from feeders,
grasp insects from the air,
and linger among fresh blossoms.

She hovers, flies forward,
and backward, even upside down.
Then, as if she’s running late,
she suddenly darts away.

*

Chipping and wing noise from the National Audubon Society.

©2024, Mary K. Doyle

Responses to “Poem–Captivating”

  1. marvellousnightmare

    I love it 🙂 And I was pleased to learn some new facts about this little wonder of nature 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Ms. Marvellous. All the best to you.

  2. Dorothy’s New Vintage Kitchen

    Beautiful Mary! I love it when they bring their little ones to the feeder.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Yes, Dorothy! Tiny parents with teeny babies. So amazing. Thank you for adding your thoughts to the discussion.

  3. Kevin

    Very lovely and informative as well, Mary! Excellent. 👏👏👏

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Kevin. Have you started your new job?

      1. Kevin

        Not yet, Mary. I am working my last shift at the current one right now and starting the new one next week

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Enjoy your last day on this job, and get a restful weekend, my friend.

          1. Kevin

            Thank you, Mary. It was a tough morning. I was not there long, but I had established a close bond with the team. Good fellows, truly.

          2. Mary K. Doyle

            Saying good-bye is hard. Some of those people were only present in our lives for that period of time. You will be making new work friends soon.

          3. Kevin

            Yes, it’s certainly difficult, Mary. No question. As much as we might try to remain detached it’s sometimes tough.

  4. Stephanie

    The best sort of container to learn more about this magical creature. ❤

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Stephanie!

  5. Maranda

    I love hummingbirds! It’s like a butterfly and bird merged together!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Yes! I can see you drawing something like that, Maranda.

      1. Maranda

        Maybe I will sometime

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Do you know about Alebrijes? You’d love them. https://midwestmary.com/2022/06/23/alebrijes-creatures-of-a-dream-world/

          1. Maranda

            Those are awesome! I would love to see them in person!

          2. Mary K. Doyle

            You would love them, Maranda. They are an amazing manifestation of creative minds.

  6. Ronit Penso Tasty Eats

    Beautiful poem!

    I watched a documentary about Hummingbirds not long ago. They are fascinating birds.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      I may have seen the same documentary. They are amazing little creatures. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts, Ronit.

  7. Willie Torres Jr.

    Wonderful Poem and Insightful Post. Thank you for Sharing

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Willie!

  8. Pooja G

    Such an interesting poem, I really didn’t know that much about hummingbirds. We don’t see them around my area.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      They are little cuties, Pooja. Maybe you’ll travel to the US someday and can see them.

      1. Pooja G

        Fingers crossed, I really want to travel the world so maybe someday I’ll see them in person.

  9. festo_sanjo

    Wow 89 times per second! That’s interesting… I loved birds when I was young… your posts brings back memories..

    1. festo_sanjo

      Sorry it was 80!

      1. Mary K. Doyle

        I knew what you meant, Festo, and appreciate you taking the time to comment. Have the best day.

        1. festo_sanjo

          You too Mary

    2. Mary K. Doyle

      Don’t you still enjoy the birds, Festo? Such simple pleasures are nature’s gifts to us.

      1. festo_sanjo

        I mean yes I do…but life got in the way, and the place am living right now! At my age people are busy trying to figure out life and not enjoying it along the way… it’s truly these simple gestures in nature that are life giving Mary, I’m still in love with birds, and had doves when I was 12…

  10. Rosaliene Bacchus

    Your poem expresses well how amazing hummingbirds are 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Rosaliene. I can get a bit carried away with the little ones.

  11. worldphoto12

    GRAN COLPO

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Grazie!

      1. worldphoto12

        PREGO

  12. Looking for the Light

    They are magical! I’ve seen their nest in Mexico in trees. They are so tiny you almost miss them.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      I think their little size is why they are so intriguing, Melinda. Thank you for joining in the conversation, my friend.

  13. Dawna

    OMGoodness, love it! My tree and feeders are filled with hummingbirds now. They are one of my favorite things to watch. Mesmerizing. Now, I know some fun facts about them, thanks to you.

    Your art work is absolutely stunning!! Love the hummingbird next to the purple flower. Purple is my favorite color too.

    Thank you Mary for sharing.

    Hugs to you my friend.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      I’m happy you also have hummingbirds and know the joy they bring. So little, so delightful. What an incredible creation. I hope you are doing well, Dawna and the day is blessed for you.

      1. Dawna

        I’m hoping to capture a photo of my little birdie blessings. They are amazing to watch. My next goal is to plant a butterfly garden.
        I hope your day is as amazing as you.
        Hugs

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          My butterfly bushes do well with little help. I think they like the spot they are in. Milkweed attracts monarchs, which are dwindling. You will enjoy the garden and the butterflies, Dawna.

          1. Dawna

            Oh I’d love to see a photo of your butterfly plants. I’ll have to check out the Milkweed plants. I wonder if they’d do well in Southern California. I’m excited to get started, once it cools down that is.

          2. Mary K. Doyle

            I don’t really know about gardening in California, Dawn, what grows best there. The purple flowers you see near the hummingbird is from the butterfly bush. They are said to be invasive, but I have two with no problem. Hugs to you, my friend.

          3. Dawna

            I love your purple flower. I’ve seen those around here too. I’ll be doing some research and looking on line for ideas and photos of butterfly gardens. I know it’ll attract some bees too, but they’re good for the environment, so I’m okay with that. I figure if I don’t swat them, perhaps they’ll be kind and not sting me. One could hope. Hugs

          4. Mary K. Doyle

            Funny. I just wrote a haiku like that, Dawna. We are on the same wavelength, often.

          5. Dawna

            I suppose its true then, great minds think alike. Honored to be on the same wavelength as you my friend. Hugs

          6. Mary K. Doyle

            Much love to you, Dawna.

  14. johnlmalone

    delightful poem; love that ending —

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, John. I appreciate the feedback!

  15. Tamyra Miller

    Loved the poem and the recording😊

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Tamyra. I appreciate you taking the time to read, listen, and respond. Have the best day.

      1. Tamyra Miller

        You’re welcome. You as well

  16. mistermaxxx08

    that BIRD Should be honored to have your voice and words connect and bring it to a incredible moment of being acknowledged. amazing and standing ovation to you both.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Ah, Mister Maxxx. You are too kind.

      1. mistermaxxx08

        I mean what I say and I say what I mean to said divine souls as yourself

  17. Laura

    Gorgeous poem and stunning photo as always, Mary! 😊 Hummingbirds are fascinating

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Hi Laura, hummingbirds really are fascinating–so small, mighty, sweet. Thank you for reading and commenting, my friend.

      1. Laura

        Anytime! Love your beautiful posts, Mary 😊

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Thank you, Laura!

  18. Michele Lee

    A treat to hear you read, thank you Mary! Amazing little creatures. 😍

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Michele. I do love the hummingbirds. They are so sweet.

  19. noga noga

    ❤An enjoyable post. Well published. I wish you happiness, progress and success, my love 🙏🏼💐😍

  20. noga noga

    😍Good morning

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Good Morning, Nougat.

      1. noga noga

        Have a nice day and good luck, my beautiful friend

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Thank you, Nougat. Enjoy your day.

  21. noga noga

    🐦Beautiful bird, thanks for the information Mary

  22. restlessjo

    I’ve never seen one in real life, Mary, so it must be incredible to have them as regular visitors. Thanks for sharing.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      The hummingbirds are friendly, especially if they recognize you. They will hover in front of me while I talk to them–as long as I don’t take out the camera. I have to take photos from a distance. They are adorable.

  23. PradP

    Mary , How beautiful a little bird looks in pictures you share,also in your poetry, hearing your voice is so alluring n pleasant, its lovely .

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you very much, Prad. I appreciate your kind comment.

  24. Destiny

    so delightful they are…a beautiful poem, Mary🤍

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Destiny. The little ones make me happy.

  25. Kym Gordon Moore

    Beautiful poem and beautiful recitation Mary! Thanks for this delightful and sweet share! 🦜💐🐦 It brightened my rainy day! 🥰🦋🌞

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, dear Kym!

      1. Kym Gordon Moore

        You are soooooo very welcome my dear Mary! Have a FANtabulous weekend! 🌞💖🥰

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Love to you, Kym.

          1. Kym Gordon Moore

            Thanks a million Mary! Much love my dear friend! 🥰🥂😍💖😘

  26. Anuran & Sayoni

    Loved it and learnt new things

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you! I appreciate that your took the time to read and comment.

  27. Amy

    Enjoy your beautiful poem through your reading, Mary!
    1243 miles, incredible for a little bird.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Amy. How about that endurance!

  28. Sunshine

    Beautiful ❤️

  29. jeanvivace

    You are really good at performing your poems, very enjoyable to listen to these. The poem is very beautiful and it was a great idea to give an info of this lovely bird in the form of art. Your photos are amazing, you are skillful with you camera. Happy weekend Mary🌺

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you so much, Jean. I appreciate all the feedback. I’m open to anything negative or ways to improve, as well. All the best to you.

      1. jeanvivace

        Did not get you, what negative?

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          Oh, I’m sorry. I meant that if you found anything that I could do better with writing or recording, I would love to hear your thoughts.

          1. jeanvivace

            I see😊 I just wondered what could be there when it comes to your post ‘negative’. You do everything perfect and your posts are good, amazing photos and I love your audio files. If I ”have to advice you” then, start to believe when I say you are excellent performer, I mean it, seriously. Have a great weekend, you multi-talented artist🌺 Your fan😊

          2. Mary K. Doyle

            I humbly thank you for your confidence in me, Jean. Blessings to you, my friend.

          3. jeanvivace

            Thank you, appreciated.

  30. worldphoto12

    BUON WEEK-END DI FOTO

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Grazie. Buon week-end.

      1. worldphoto12

        GRAZIE

  31. Hitasakhi

    Informative and lovely poem with sweet voice of your too Good 👍 ***** 5 ⭐️

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Hitasakhi.

  32. Garden Bliss

    Wonderful poem Mary and such fascinating facts about this gorgeous bird. Thank you.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you! I appreciate your kind words.

  33. Wholeness Chronicles

    Wonderful and informative! Thanks for sharing. 🌸

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Than you. Have the best day.

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  35. jeanvivace

    Now I got your point! I’ve been away from home and listened to your poems with a phone but now I am at home. You are smart Mary, there is no humming anymore, the audio is clean. Very good job my friend😊

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Jean. I record on my phone. If I do an audio book, a friend has offered to work with me in his fabulous studio.

      1. jeanvivace

        You get very good quality with your phone. Doing an audio book is a great idea and I am very happy for you that your friend will work with you, certainly you create a beautiful and inspiring product for your fans and audience. Good luck ☀️😊☀️

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  38. Cardell Lewis

    Very nice, what is it like to see a hummingbird, I’ve never seen one before, if you put hummingbird food outside, do you think they would show up?

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      In my experience, yes. If you set out a feeder with sugar water ( 4 cups water, 1 cup sugar. Save what you don’t use in the refrigerator.) they find it. Where are you located?

  39. Alex Smithson

    What a beautiful captivating shot of the glorious hummingbird!

    I love learning about the natural wonders, and it was so refreshing learning more about the gracious hummingbird through your poem.

    The poem is so soothing, and I was immediately drawn to the beauty of the hummingbird.

    Thank you for sharing this, Mary!

    Alex Smithson 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Alex. I appreciate the feedback and you taking the time to comment.

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  42. Lyse

    Lovely.🌼

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you!

      1. Lyse

        My pleasure!🙂

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  44. Klausbernd

    Hi Mary
    We never saw a hummingbird in the nature.
    Thanks for sharing.
    All the best
    The Fab Four of Cley
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      They are tiny and adorable. I do love them. Thank you for commenting.

  45. Ar.Titus Vargis

    Great

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you!

  46. Kota Ramalingaiah Shivoham

    🙏
    .*
    Shivoham* 🙏🙏🙏

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you.

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  48. spotlightchoices.com-C. Wilson

    Beautiful photo and enjoyed the poem!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you! I do love the hummingbirds.

      1. spotlightchoices.com-C. Wilson

        Yes – they are unique!

  49. Jaskaran Singh

    A personified bird, if they are indeed with you, would be delighted with this. An incredible journey explained by @Mary K. Doyle💫💫🫶🫶

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, and welcome to Midwest Mary. It is wonderful to see you here.

      1. Jaskaran Singh

        My pleasure here 💞

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  52. pedometergeek

    I am impressed with your poem and understand your captivation with the hummers. We have already had one stop by, but haven’t seen him since.

    Great photo…they are difficult to get, I know that from personal experience.

    What part of the Midwest are you in? I’m in Ohio. ~Nan

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Hi Nan, I’m west of Chicago. I regularly have hummingbirds in my yard.

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