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Poem–Life’s Twisted Path

Life’s Twisted Path

Life doesn’t take us directly from birth to death.
We veer left and right, step back, dip down, climb back up.
We trip along the way. Fall flat on our faces.
We stand up, brush ourselves off, and get back on track.
Walking, running, skipping, jumping, strolling, pausing,
and capturing sights, sounds, and scents along the way.
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Poem and Photo by Mary K. Doyle
Anderson Japanese Gardens, Rockford, IL

©2024, Mary K. Doyle

Responses to “Poem–Life’s Twisted Path”

  1. vermavkv

    Very nice

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you!

  2. Looking for the Light

    So true, life is not a signle path either but we can all reach out own path if we have a clear idea of where we want to go and continue trying to reach it, no matter the obsticles. Great post, Mary.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      You are right about that, Melinda!

  3. Maranda

    I love a twisty path in nature…but sometimes this life thing gets too twisty!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Right?

  4. gc1963

    Very well said and recited

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

  5. Dawna

    Beautiful Mary, both the words written and the photo. Life definitely is full of twists and turns.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      And the scary part is when we can’t see what’s ahead. Thank you for reading and commenting, Dawna.

  6. Drops of Ink

    Beautifully penned. 🤍

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Phoebe!

  7. Nancy Homlitas

    I enjoyed your recitation of your lovely-and poignant-poem. Your images complimented it beautifully. 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Nancy. I appreciate your kindness.

  8. Ronit Penso Tasty Eats

    Beautiful, and so true. As long as we get up again… 🙂

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Yes, Ronit. Get up and keep going! Always a joy to see you here, my friend.

  9. Julia Thompson

    Very beautiful! It is something that we often forget in trying times, but something that is worth reminding ourselves from time to time 😊

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      So true, Julie. In the moment, we can’t imagine ever feeling good again.

  10. Willie Torres Jr.

    Beautiful 🤗 A Great Reminder that through the trials and struggles, we must not give up and assume that we are defeated… Wonderful

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thanks, Willie. You are correct. Just keep on going.

      1. Willie Torres Jr.

        Amen 🙏🤗

  11. Dorothy’s New Vintage Kitchen

    So true! The journey is one both unpredictable and exciting.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      I like that, Dorothy. Unpredictable and exciting!

  12. Rosaliene Bacchus

    Well expressed, Mary, with lots of rhythmic motion.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Rosaliene. All the best to you.

  13. luisa zambrotta

    Such a beautiful poem!
    The photos are great

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, dear Luisa.

      1. luisa zambrotta

        You are so very welcome Mary!
        It’s always my pleasure!

  14. festo_sanjo

    Couldn’t agree more!… life is a paradox, not to be solved but a reality to be experienced. Wonderful read by the way!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Festo. I appreciate your thoughtful words.

  15. PradP

    Poem narrates the true nature of life,it states the path which is universal & equal for everyone.Nice to read.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      You are right about that, Prad. We all go through that. Thank you for reading and commenting, my friend.

  16. Pooja G

    So true, we fall down or stumble many times but we have to be resilient and keep getting back up.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      So right, Girlfriend.

  17. jeanvivace

    Mary, you did it again, you don’t know how much I love these. You are a pro writer but you are also a pro performer. I just love your voice and interpretation. It really comes so naturally. You are very inspiring woman, thank you so so much for making these. Of course your poem is beautiful and deeply touching but it is perfect when performed by you! Seems to me that my prayers have been heard too🌺🌺🌺

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Jean, I don’t know what to say. I’ve always thought my voice to be weak. I’m humbled by your words. Love and blessings to you.

      1. jeanvivace

        You have not a weak voice, you have beautiful voice. Both your poems and your performances are like music, there are crescendo, diminuendo, accelerando, rallentando etc.. and this all comes so naturally, it is a gift. Likewise much the love of God to you and thank you for your prayers. Have a blessed new month🌺

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          I’m humbled. Thank you, and God bless you.

          1. jeanvivace

            🌺🌹🌺

      2. jeanvivace

        I concentrated so much my attention on your poem, that I forgot to take look at your pictures. They are very beautiful!!

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          You are so very kind. Thank you, Jean.

          1. jeanvivace

            You are too Mary and I appreciate that😊

  18. Laura

    Very beautiful, Mary! Love the image that accompanies the poem as well! 😊

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Laura. Sometimes, the photo responds to the words.

  19. Stephanie

    Excellent poem, comforting and appreciative. ❤ Thank you.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, dear Stephanie.

  20. Kym Gordon Moore

    Oh wow Mary, what an incredible poem that’s so fluid. Your photos remind me of the Crookedest Street in San Francisco. I can’t understand how people live on that street. Love this post my friend. 😊💖😍 https://www.sftravel.com/things-to-do/attractions/iconic-sf/lombard-street

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Oh, my goodness. I don’t think I could drive that street! Thank you, my friend.

      1. Kym Gordon Moore

        Girl, someone else was driving as we meandered down that street. Blew me away! 🚗🚙🚌

        1. Mary K. Doyle

          🙂 🙂 🙂

  21. Michele Lee

    I love your readings so very much! Thank you, Mary. 🕊️

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Michele. I appreciate your kind words.

  22. Edward Ortiz

    Wonderful poem, Mary. That’s a beautiful garden. Thank you for showing this new Illinoisan where the beautiful places are.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      The garden is worth going to, Edward. It’s beautiful at least most of the year.

      1. Edward Ortiz

        Excellent! I just added it to my list of places to visit.

  23. LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙

    So Beautiful, Mary! 💞

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you for taking the time to comment, T’.

      1. LoveLifeHappiness&More💙💙

        Always a pleasure.

  24. Sunshine

    Beautiful ❤️

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you!

  25. Anuran & Sayoni

    So true life is beautiful yet so much patience is needed . Well written Mary

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

  26. marvellousnightmare

    Mesmerizing pictures and the poem is so deep in meaning, perfectly reflecting the idea that we are here to gain experience, not simply stumble from one point to another. The mistakes, lessons, and rising up after a bitter failure are what make our lives rich and meaningful! 🙂
    Beautifully shared, Mary, as always ❤

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Yes, Ms. Marvellous, you are so right. You make a good point about how much we learn from our mistakes and setbacks. All the best to you, my friend.

  27. Hitasakhi

    You recited so sweetly

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Ah, thank you. That is kind to say.

  28. Hermosa

    Beautiful

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Hermosa.

  29. noga noga

    Bravo, Mary, you have depicted life as it should be. Thank you for the good participation. I wish you happiness, progress and success. Hello

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, Dear Nougat.

  30. Hitasakhi

    Nice

  31. Ernie ‘Dawg’

    Mary, what a way to accurately sum up life’s adventures. The picture compliments the words nicely but what brings it to the top like cream on milk is your voice. Perfect, you smoothly tell stories with professionalism and grace. A fantastic post my friend.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you so much, Ernie. I greatly appreciate your kind words. Have a fabulous weekend.

      1. Ernie ‘Dawg’

        You too!

  32. Dr. K Anil Roy

    Life is a travel, ultimate destination will be the same,the ride though will be full of ups and downs, how we enjoy it is up to us. The travel could be smooth, rough, slow, fast, long or with a lot of company. But travel the path we must

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      You are correct about how we enjoy the ride is up to us. Great point, Dr. Roy.

  33. Cindy Georgakas

    A wonderful poem, Mary reminding us of exactly life’s journey made particularly heartfelt with your words!

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you, my friend.

  34. Garden Bliss

    Beautiful poem and wonderful to hear your voice too. 🌸

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you. Enjoy your Sunday!

  35. Mindful Mystic (MM)

    Absolutely gorgeous poem, Mary, that sums up the essence of life. 🙏😍

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you. That means a lot to me.

  36. Dawn Pisturino

    Beautiful poem and photos!

  37. mistermaxxx08

    we all know you are a spirited spirit and bring so much light and are so moving and more than that you represent Love

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      I try, but I’m not always successful. That’s the truth, Mister Maxxx.

      1. mistermaxxx08

        Feel your honesty and depth

  38. MsHazyBrain

    So well said

  39. ROAD TRIP’N

    Absolutely stunning.

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you!

  40. thesimlux

    Perfect pairing of your verses and images!! 😍

    1. Mary K. Doyle

      Thank you for that wonderful feedback.

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